This is chater5: Discussion part and it is required to paraphrase, editing, form

This is chater5: Discussion part and it is required to paraphrase, editing, formating content and some parts need to write it and search for previouse studies results and link it with my study results.
You can paraphrase all of the content except the results and finding which highlighted in green.
There are several theories and it will be required to paraphrase it and link it with my study.